Poem: Wishing on a Star

I originally wrote this poem on December 22, 2020, in response to reading β€œMake a Wish to a Star and It Will Come Trueβ€œ, by Carla Milho, a very lovely lady and talented writer from Lisbon, Portugal. I then posted it on my site a few days later, as part of a compilation. And, now…freestanding.

⭐ 	A light to the east,
	After dark
	In the sky.

πŸ•Š 	A dove is released,
	And my wish
	Came to fly.

πŸ™ 	Bound for the heavens,
	With trust
	In a prayer.

❀️ 	The woman I love,
	With hope
	We will share.

Β© 2020 Phil Perkins


PHOTO CREDIT:Β this is a modified photo fromΒ unsplash.com.

NOTE: this poem uses the Preformatted Block, which allows for indentation of text exactly as pasted. However, in so doing, a monospace font is used.

Responses

  1. Inge David Avatar

    Mooi gedicht, ik hou er van Phil! πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸŒΉ

    1. Phil Avatar

      Heel erg bedankt voor je vriendelijke woorden, mijn beste vriendin Inge! Much appreciated! πŸ€—πŸŒΉ

  2. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Such a beautiful, loving poem Phil! πŸ’–πŸ’–

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you very much, dear Cindy! I’m glad you like my poem and I appreciate your kind words. πŸ€—πŸŒΉ

      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        You’re so very welcome my dear friend! πŸ’–

        1. Phil Avatar

          Back atcha, my dear friend! πŸ’–

          1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

            πŸ’–πŸ’– πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ thanks!

  3. Annabel Avatar

    You’re of a poetic soul in hiding, Phil! Beautiful format with a stylish sense of modernity! Bravo!

    1. Phil Avatar

      Your wonderful words and lovely face always warm my heart and brighten my day! Thank you so much, dear Annabel, and I wish for you a splendid week ahead! πŸ˜™πŸŒΉ

      1. Annabel Avatar

        Thank you,Phil!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ’•you’re kind!πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰

  4. Carolyn Kaiser Harmon Avatar

    Beautiful imagery, Phil – always picturing, even in your poems ❀️

    1. Phil Avatar

      You’re sweet, Carolyn ~ thank you & I’m glad you enjoyed it. Wishing you a wonderful week ahead! πŸ€—πŸŒΉ

      1. Carolyn Kaiser Harmon Avatar

        Thank you, Phil – ❀️

        1. Phil Avatar

          Most welcome, dear Carolyn πŸ’–πŸ™πŸΌ

  5. LAWET Avatar

    exceptional

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you πŸ‘

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