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Poem in Response
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Prior to turning off my computer last evening, I happened to see the smile of a dear friend, the lovely poetess Michele Lee, as she appeared in the WordPress Reader – and, I wrote a few lines of poetry. This morning, I read her post “unTangled” and was inspired to complete this poem in response…

Stepping softly
Swirling smooth Sonoran sands
Moonlight drives her desert dance

An artful life
Drawing rain from the heavens
– beauty stirring tides of chance

© 2023 Phil Perkins

PHOTO CREDIT: modified photo 1 and photo 2 from unsplash.com.

Moonlight Drive, by The Doors (1967) – see lyrics here.

25 responses to “Poem in Response”

  1. christinenovalarue Avatar
    christinenovalarue

    🧡

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    1. Phil Avatar
      Phil

      TY dear Christine 🙂

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  2. House of Heart Avatar
    House of Heart

    Lovely Response, Phil 💖

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    1. Phil Avatar
      Phil

      Most kind of you to say, my beautiful friend Holly. Thank you & have a great day! 💖

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      1. House of Heart Avatar
        House of Heart

        You too, have a great weekend!🌹

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        1. Phil Avatar
          Phil

          TY my dear 🌹

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          1. House of Heart Avatar
            House of Heart

            Hope it’s terrific ! Any hiking this weekend? It’s too hot here to go out, maybe to the beach for a very short while. 💞

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            1. Phil Avatar
              Phil

              Hopefully hiking on Sunday, but the beach sounds much nicer. The combination of your natural beauty with that of an ocean landscape, like a scene from a dream – would love to be there. 💞

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              1. House of Heart Avatar
                House of Heart

                💞🏖

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  3. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    ooh ooh ooh gorgeous Phil!💗

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    1. Phil Avatar
      Phil

      I always appreciate your kind words, sweet Cindy ~ thanks sooooo much, my dear friend! 💗😘

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
        Cindy Georgakas

        Well it’s a delight to share them with you… thanks my dear friend❣️

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        1. Phil Avatar
          Phil

          💞

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          1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
            Cindy Georgakas

            💗💗💗

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  4. Annabel Avatar
    Annabel

    I seriously think you should write more poems more often as not to cage your poetic talent in quietude! Beautiful lines, Phil!

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    1. Phil Avatar
      Phil

      It’s so nice to see you, lovely Annabel, and I thank you for your kind words. I enjoyed reading your poem and about your plans for Northern California – such exciting times, and I’m so happy you’re doing well, my friend. Best wishes always! ❤️

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      1. Annabel Avatar
        Annabel

        You are such a gentleman, Phil! I am also delighted to read you, always!🥳

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  5. Michele Lee Avatar
    Michele Lee

    Thank you for this beautiful gift. A lovely tone and gesture. 😊 I WISH I could draw rains from the heavens! The monsoons are MIA! I need to do a rain dance. 😁

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    1. Phil Avatar
      Phil

      Most welcome, dear Michele. I truly appreciate the inspiration shared through your creative writings, and your always present natural beauty – indeed, 54 never looked so good! Wishing you a rain-soaked weekend, my friend. 🤞💃🌧️

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  6. seemakaushikmukt Avatar
    seemakaushikmukt

    Beauiful lines !

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    1. Phil Avatar
      Phil

      Thanks very much, dear Seema 🤗🌹

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  7. Dawn Pisturino Avatar
    Dawn Pisturino

    So beautiful, Phil!

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    1. Phil Avatar
      Phil

      Thanks so much, my sweet friend Dawn 💗

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  8. tiffanyarpdaleo Avatar
    tiffanyarpdaleo

    What a lovely poem, Phil! Michele is truly a special and talented lady! ♥

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    1. Phil Avatar
      Phil

      Thanks a bunch, dear Tiffany ~ much appreciated. Yes indeed, she certainly is. 💯 Have a great weekend, my friend! 😎

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