Poem in Response

Having read “Plumeria“, written by a dear friend – the lovely and talented Poetess, Holly Hunter – I was inspired to write this poem in response…

One more moonlight mermaid serenade
Under cover of night, tidal flow
Tropical, warming winds set the stage
Making waves, wet with love, hearts aglow

Then, as the moon became blanketed by clouds, she vanished with a splash into reflections of the sea. For many weeks, thereafter, I’d walk alone along the sandy shores of Florida, holding her close in my heart – an indelible vision of beauty etched on my memory – with the dream of one more rendezvous in the rolling tides of romance, with a mermaid named Holly.

Β© 2023 Phil Perkins


PHOTO CREDIT: modified photo from unsplash.com.

Moondance, by Van Morrison (1970) – see lyrics here.

18 responses to “Poem in Response”

    1. Thanks πŸ‘

    1. TY dear Christine πŸ™‚

  1. Beautifully written.

    1. Thanks very much, dear Kymber πŸ€—πŸŒΉ

  2. Hauntingly beautiful dear Poet, thank you from the bottom of my heart ❀️

    1. You are most kind, beautiful Poetess – and, always welcome! Frequently on my mind, you continue to inspire my writings and I’m so glad you enjoyed this poem for you. Thank you, dear Holly ~ much love my friend ❀️

      1. Thank you Phil, have a wonderful day πŸ‚πŸ§‘πŸ‚

        1. And to you, my dear πŸ‚πŸ§‘πŸ‚

  3. Spectacular imagery, Phil!

    1. TY dear Dawn ~ much appreciated! 😘

  4. Nice poem, Phil! 🌊

    1. TY dear Krissy πŸ€—

  5. I really love the music, Phil!

    1. Right on, Giannis πŸ‘

  6. Ooooooo…love song, in words. πŸ‘πŸ‘β™₯οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘

    1. Thanks so much, dear Robin πŸ€—πŸŒΉ

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