Poem: She Placed a Star

I wrote this poem for a friend who is a frequent source of inspiration, Mukti Masih – a published Poetess, freelance writer and beautiful woman from India…

I watched as she placed a star in the night sky
Fixed by her gentle touch, as though meant to be
Brilliantly aglow in its constellation
Within my heart, I have a space for Mukti

I read her verse
A birthday gift
The words rang true, indeed

If I may ask
Just one more time
I’ll listen and pay heed

Please hear my call
Through prayer today
Desires of the heart

To find a way
And bridge the gap
Together, make a start

Eternity so long, when love lives alone
Like an empty house, with one room but no phone

Longing for her voice
As the day draws near
Both hands, hand-in-hand
Our path ahead clear

Β© 2021 Phil Perkins


PHOTO CREDIT: modified photo from unsplash.com.

Comments

28 responses to “Poem: She Placed a Star”

  1. francisashis Avatar

    Wow! Love your poem for an Indian.

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you πŸ‘

  2. Dawn Pisturino Avatar

    A beautiful poem!

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thanks so much, Dawn ~ glad you like it πŸ™πŸ˜Š

  3. Kym Gordon Moore Avatar

    Awwwwww Phil, how beautiful and touching. πŸ₯° πŸ’ 😘 You have a loving and kind heart my friend. πŸ’– πŸ’˜ πŸ’ Thank you for sharing this sweet poem that you dedicated to Mukti with us!!! πŸ™πŸΌ

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you so much, my dear friend Kym πŸ™πŸ˜Š

      1. Kym Gordon Moore Avatar

        My pleasure always Phil! πŸ’– πŸ’˜ πŸ’ Cheers! πŸ₯‚

        1. Phil Avatar

          Cheers Kym πŸ₯‚πŸ€—πŸŒΉ

  4. muktimasih Avatar

    Whoa, beautiful. Beyond this, I am speechless. Also you are getting better at this by the day, poetry I mean. Fantastic.

    1. Phil Avatar

      I very much appreciate your kind words, my dear friend Mukti, πŸ™ as well as your encouragement and inspiration. ✍🏼 I think you’re a rock star…a gifted and very talented woman of extraordinary beauty! Thank you, and I wish you a wonderful weekend. β€‹πŸ’•βœ¨β€‹

  5. Michele Lee Avatar

    Gorgeous poem, poet Phil. πŸ’– You do possess creative talent, with the lens and the pen! πŸ‘πŸΌ

    1. Phil Avatar

      A nicer compliment I cannot imagine. My hats off to you, dear Michele ~ thank you. 🌞🌹

      1. Michele Lee Avatar

        You deserve it! You have such a giving and loving heart and spirit that you so graciously share with the world. πŸ’— Thank you. πŸ™πŸΌ

        1. Phil Avatar

          You are so kind, Michele. ❣️ Thank you for these heartfelt words, so very thoughtful of you ~ much appreciation my friend. πŸ™πŸΌ

          1. Michele Lee Avatar

            It is easy to be kind to some who generously shares gifts and compassion. πŸ’ Thank you, Phil and best to you. πŸ’

  6. 100 Country Trek Avatar

    This is a very beautiful poem..and makes me feel peaceful. Thanks.

    1. Phil Avatar

      I am glad you enjoyed it, Anita. Thank you πŸ™‚

  7. Robin King Avatar

    This sings, Phil. It’s music in words. πŸ‘‹β™₯οΈπŸ‘‹

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you so much, Robin ~ much appreciated. πŸ™πŸΌ

  8. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    what a heartfelt piece and gift you shared honoring Mukti with us Phil. Sooo touching. What a special impact she has made I can see. I’ll go visit her now. Thanks my friend!πŸ’–

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you very much. Yes, I’ve enjoyed Mukti’s writings and poetry over several years. She is an intellectually compelling, creatively talented and very beautiful woman, for whose friendship I am grateful. Have a great weekend, dear Cindy. πŸ€—πŸŒΉ

      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        That’s lovely and I appreciate it that you share your friends with us… I am now following her as well. Your friends a bit great pics and I’m enjoying getting to know them all so thank you πŸ’•

        1. Phil Avatar

          That’s wonderful, Cindy ~ thank you so much πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜Š The more the merrier!

          1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

            Yes, I agree!! you’re so welcome … xo πŸ’–πŸ€—

  9. rajkkhoja Avatar
    rajkkhoja

    So Amazing pic. So beautiful words in poem by recommend to picture. Lovely poem written. I like

    1. Phil Avatar

      I’m glad you like my poetry, Rajkkhoja – thank you.

  10. SRIKANTH Avatar

    Quite an inspiring poem Phil 🀝

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you, Srikanth πŸ‘

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