Poem in Response

Having read “Curves and Flows“, written by a very talented and lovely poetess hailing from Florida, my dear friend Holly Hunter – in which her flowing words paint an ethereal, romantic image – I was inspired to write this poem in response…

I arose to the aroma of a rose
With her hair draped in my face
– Holly in the House of Heart
Flowing red, in silk and lace

Cascading streams of stardust
Rained like water, heaven-sent
Onto our bodies, soaking
Reveling in loves ascent

To the moon, then back again
Riding cosmic waves of bliss
There’s really nothing better
Than to share her scent and kiss

© 2023 Phil Perkins


One of These Nights, by Eagles (1975) – see lyrics here.

26 responses to “Poem in Response”

  1. vermavkv Avatar

    Beautiful.

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thanks Vijay 👍

  2. Timothy Price Avatar
    Timothy Price

    Beautiful response poem.

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thanks so much, Tim 👍

    1. Phil Avatar

      TY dear Christine 🙂

  3. Mây Bắc Mỹ Avatar

    So sweet 😋

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thanks so much, dear Mây ~ I’m glad you like it! 🤗🌹

  4. 100 Country Trek Avatar

    I love this poem. Anita

    1. Phil Avatar

      I’m so glad, dear Anita ~ thank you! 🤗

  5. Kym Gordon Moore Avatar

    Beautiful poem in response Phil, my Poetic Master Photographer…I think Holly would be delighted! 🥰💖😉🥂😊

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you so much, dear Kym ~ I appreciate your kind words! 🍯🥂 Yes, she liked it on her post. 🤗🌹

      1. Kym Gordon Moore Avatar

        How awesome Phil. You go my friend…a lyrical genius! 😉💖😘🍯🥰

        1. Phil Avatar

          Thank you, my dear friend ❣️🥂xo

          1. Kym Gordon Moore Avatar

            You are most welcome dear Phil. Hugs and smooches to you too! 🤗💖😘🍯🥰🥂😍

  6. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Nice Phil.. I’m sure she’s blushing … and thankful❣️

    1. Phil Avatar

      So kind of you to say, dear Cindy ~ thanks very much & have a great weekend! 😘🌹

      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        You’re so very welcome Phil and you do the same my friend! 💞

        1. Phil Avatar

          TY dear friend ❣️

          1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

            😘😘😘

  7. Dawn Pisturino Avatar

    How romantic, Phil!

    1. Phil Avatar

      You’re a sweetheart, Dawn ~ thank you! 🤗

  8. hitandrun1964 Avatar

    She is fabulous. Lovely poem.

    1. Phil Avatar

      Holly is fabulous, indeed. Thank you, dear Gigi 🤗🌹

  9. House of Heart Avatar

    This is so beautiful, I’m delighted dear Phil. You’re a wonderful friend and poet and I’m so fortunate to receive this amazing poem in response. ❤️🌹

    1. Phil Avatar

      It’s mutual and my pleasure, dear Holly. I’m grateful for your friendship, appreciate your inspiring presence, and your beautiful smile always brightens my day! Thank you, lovely poetess. ❤️🌹

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