Poem in Response

Having read “Curves and Flows“, written by a very talented and lovely poetess hailing from Florida, my dear friend Holly Hunter – in which her flowing words paint an ethereal, romantic image – I was inspired to write this poem in response…

I arose to the aroma of a rose
With her hair draped in my face
– Holly in the House of Heart
Flowing red, in silk and lace

Cascading streams of stardust
Rained like water, heaven-sent
Onto our bodies, soaking
Reveling in loves ascent

To the moon, then back again
Riding cosmic waves of bliss
There’s really nothing better
Than to share her scent and kiss

© 2023 Phil Perkins


One of These Nights, by Eagles (1975) – see lyrics here.

26 responses to “Poem in Response”

  1. Beautiful.

    1. Thanks Vijay 👍

  2. Beautiful response poem.

    1. Thanks so much, Tim 👍

    1. TY dear Christine 🙂

    1. Thanks so much, dear Mây ~ I’m glad you like it! 🤗🌹

  3. I love this poem. Anita

    1. I’m so glad, dear Anita ~ thank you! 🤗

  4. Beautiful poem in response Phil, my Poetic Master Photographer…I think Holly would be delighted! 🥰💖😉🥂😊

    1. Thank you so much, dear Kym ~ I appreciate your kind words! 🍯🥂 Yes, she liked it on her post. 🤗🌹

      1. How awesome Phil. You go my friend…a lyrical genius! 😉💖😘🍯🥰

        1. Thank you, my dear friend ❣️🥂xo

          1. You are most welcome dear Phil. Hugs and smooches to you too! 🤗💖😘🍯🥰🥂😍

  5. Nice Phil.. I’m sure she’s blushing … and thankful❣️

    1. So kind of you to say, dear Cindy ~ thanks very much & have a great weekend! 😘🌹

      1. You’re so very welcome Phil and you do the same my friend! 💞

        1. TY dear friend ❣️

  6. How romantic, Phil!

    1. You’re a sweetheart, Dawn ~ thank you! 🤗

  7. She is fabulous. Lovely poem.

    1. Holly is fabulous, indeed. Thank you, dear Gigi 🤗🌹

  8. This is so beautiful, I’m delighted dear Phil. You’re a wonderful friend and poet and I’m so fortunate to receive this amazing poem in response. ❤️🌹

    1. It’s mutual and my pleasure, dear Holly. I’m grateful for your friendship, appreciate your inspiring presence, and your beautiful smile always brightens my day! Thank you, lovely poetess. ❤️🌹

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