Poem in Response

Having read “Primitive“, a poem of passion penned by my dear friend, Holly Hunter – a beautiful and talented Poetess hailing from Florida – I was inspired to write this poem in response…

It’s never too soon
For a trip to the moon
When the love in her heart catches fire

Magnetic delight
Cresting waves in the night
On the beach, tidal flows of desire

ยฉ 2024 Phil Perkins


PHOTO CREDIT: modified photo from unsplash.com.

Night Moves, by Bob Seger (1976) – see lyrics here.

Comments

20 responses to “Poem in Response”

  1. GP Avatar

    Holly is wonderful, isn’t she. Your response is perfect.

    1. Phil Avatar

      Yes, she most certainly is – thank you ๐Ÿ‘

  2. Giannis Pit Avatar

    I always follow your music collection, Phil. Have a nice day.

    1. Phil Avatar

      Right on, Giannis & thanks – you too ๐Ÿ‘

  3. Dawn Pisturino Avatar

    Such a beautiful poem with vivid imagery!

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you, dear Dawn ~ much appreciated! ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน

  4. vermavkv Avatar

    Beautiful.

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you, Vijay ๐Ÿ‘

  5. Kymber Hawke Avatar

    This is a great poem, Phil!

    1. Phil Avatar

      Most kind of you to say, dear Kymber ~ thanks very much! ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน

  6. House of Heart Avatar

    So beautiful dear Phil. Iโ€™m very honored. Have a lovely day ๐Ÿ’–

    1. Phil Avatar

      I think you’re a treasure, my friend. A beautiful presence in my dreams, you always brighten my day and inspire creativity. I appreciate you very much, dear Holly ~ thanks & same to you ๐Ÿ’–

      1. House of Heart Avatar

        Too kind dear Phil. Thank you ๐ŸŒน

  7. Kym Gordon Moore Avatar

    What a magical poem in response to Holly’s poem Phil! Thanks for sharing my Poetic Master Photographer! โœ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ“ธ๐ŸŒŠ

    1. Phil Avatar

      I appreciate your kind words, sweet Poetess Kym ~ TY my dear friend ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿ’–

      1. Kym Gordon Moore Avatar

        Oh my dear Phil, you are so very welcome. My pleasure! ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽญ๐Ÿ“ธ๐Ÿฅฐ

  8. hitandrun1964 Avatar

    Goes with her poem so beautifully.

    1. Phil Avatar

      So kind of you to say, dear Gigi ~ thanks very much! ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน

  9. myrelar Avatar

    <3 <3 <3

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thanks so much, dear Myrelar ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน

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