Poem in Response

Having read “Words“, written by a dear friend, the lovely and talented Floridian Poetess, Holly Hunter – wherein her pen drafts deep beauty for the moon to marvel – I was inspired to write this poem in response…

From the ocean, rose a wave
Riding winds of evermore
As full moonlight turned the tide
Spreading silk soft on the shore

She came with a sheen of salt
Sent my heart to skip a beat
Long red hair and hazel eyes
Sexy scales and flipper feet

Beautiful mermaid, Holly
On the sand, my dreams came true
There’s simply no place better
Then our midnight rendezvous

© 2025 Phil Perkins


· Part Two ·

I wrote another poem about a mermaid named Holly in 2023, which you might enjoy reading. And, I encourage you to visit Holly’s web site at the House of Heart, where you may peruse her wonderful poetry and prose. Thank you!

PHOTO CREDIT: modified photo from unsplash.com.

Use Me, by Bill Withers (1972) – see lyrics here.

Responses

  1. Kymber Hawke Avatar

    Holly is amazing. And so is your poem!

    1. Phil Avatar

      Add yourself to the list and we have a trifecta! 🙌 Thanks so much, dear Kymber ~ I appreciate your kind words & wish you a wonderful weekend! ✨🤗

      1. Kymber Hawke Avatar

        LOL A trifecta! I like it! 😀

        Happy weekend to you! 🙂

        1. Phil Avatar

          Cool breeze, Kymber & thank you! 🙂

  2. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    oh a beautiful poem and tribute to our beautiful masterfully skilled Holly! So wonderful, Phil! 💓 Good to see comments on for a minnie. 🌹

    1. Phil Avatar

      You’re a sweetheart, dear Cindy, and I’m so glad you like it. 🌹 Yes, indeed – like yours, Holly’s poetry is excellent! I appreciate your comment very much, my friend 💞

      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        I sure did! aww you are sweet and it’s my pleasure always🌹

  3. hitandrun1964 Avatar

    Beautiful she is. Lovely tribute.

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thanks very much, dear Gigi 🤗 Yes, Indeed – Holly is a beautiful and very talented friend ✨

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