Poem in Response

Reading a comment made by my close friend, Penny Granger, on yesterday’s Snow-Covered Chairlift post, I was inspired to write this poem in response…

Lurking in the woods
Behind every tree
Are spirits of old
Seeking to be free

Onto a chairlift
So ghostly, unseen
They come here to ride
This skiing machine

When once others came
The mountain did roar
Not so much, today
Though, only before

Yet, now ghosts arrive
Lift-tickets in hand
To ski down the slopes
This lifeless woodland

Echoes from the past
Resound, shredding snow
Off moguls they launch
As one with the flow

Enjoying each day
Abridging pastimes
The old becomes new
Through rhythm in rhymes

© 2025 Phil Perkins


Mirage, by Santana (1974) – see lyrics here.


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11 responses to “Poem in Response”

  1. I love this, my darling man, …five stars to you, it’s very atmospheric, and if it’s in response to my comment I’m thrilled, it draws fantastic pictures in the mind, almost melancholy, echoes from the past-wise, … mio poeta straordinario e anima gemella, …PS❤️

    1. Yes, my darling lady, ’twas your words through which inspiration took hold, growing verse by verse as melancholic voices from the past, echoing lyrically in words befitting this winter season. Grazie, amore mio e anima gemella… PS❤️

      1. idem, mia cara e anima gemella, …PS❤️

  2. Bloom both of you, Penn and Phil! All the best.

    1. I appreciate your kind words, dear Hazel, and wish you a fine evening my friend 🤗

      1. Thanks, Phil

  3. Nice one👍🏼 I enjoyed skiing with my dad in younger years

    1. Right on, Melanie. Such wonderful memories, indeed. Thank you & have a great day! 🙂

  4. you gave the image a wonderful story, Phil… (Penn’s comments are such…always inspiring ✨️)
    🤍

    1. Most kind of you, dear Destiny, thanks so much. And, yes – Penny so often puts inspiration in my pen. Have a great day! ✨🤗

      1. pleasure…and happy weekend, Phil…🤍🤗🙏

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